
poem? wat do you think it relates to, ??
Sorry for not being pretty or perfect enough
sorry for not having the golden locks or the blue eyes but instead have the black eyes like the midnight moon
sorry for not looking like what u expected, sorry for not being fair enough but instead have the sun kissed tan
sorry for not speaking fluent enough
sorry for being the foreigner and not the local girl up the road
sorry for me seeming like a dream but instead am a reality
a human with limits
sorry for me saying impossibility has greater limits than possibilty
sorry for being not what you expected
sorry for being so far fetched
sorry for me dreaming only for a little while and making you part of my fantasy
i will not say sorry if you accept me the way i am
Well, presumably it refers to you and the way you feel towards society or perhaps some person.
Good stuff it has fine form. The change of mood in the last line is a very good idea and could be made better by ditching the cliche “accept me the way I am” and replacing it with something really memorable and strong.
Keep up the good work!
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